Enchantments

[Dragon's muse]

I rather liked it. I would like to see the setting more fleshed out, as mentioned before. The writing style is descriptive and sensual, which is appropriate to the setting (I've tried to get that kind of atmosphere, but failed For what it's worth, I think you should continue.

Glad you like it. The setting will be more fleshed out as the tale progresses. This is my first venture into fantasy in conjunctin with erotica. Feeling my way as it were. Vincent and Tali will continue

rose