Even though it's more extreme than my usual tastes, I liked this story in all its dark, twisted glory.

To the nits:

I liked the introduction but this sentence seemed to break the flow too early in the story. I don't know exactly how it should be improved but it feels somewhat awkward.

"Of course. I've a friend who…he is the...um...director of a facility that creates these masterpieces,”

second:
A tall woman of an older generation stood over what appeared to be a marble statue depicting a nymph pleasuring two satyrs. Smiling she bent down and peered into the nymph's closed eyes and whispered something.

And last one that I found:
"She has relative freedom until lock into her place,"

Something is definitely wrong here...


All in all a good story with high literary value and questionable content, like I expected from you.

Satan_Klaus