Camera Obscured John56 1st Assignment

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Rose,

Thank you for your professional critique of the story. You have cleared up things that I found muddy and couldn't think how to fix. I appreciate it.

Also I will continue the story and let you read it, you have been inspirational to me. And of course thanks for the great words. I don't write much fiction and this is my first attempt at true erotica, so your words are appreciated.

I await my next assignment and I will work on the continuation of this story.

Oh and tense is a constant problem with me, so you hit one of my "walls" right on the button. I will work on that.

have a great day.


John