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  1. #7
    John56{vg}
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    Rose,

    Thank you for your professional critique of the story. You have cleared up things that I found muddy and couldn't think how to fix. I appreciate it.

    Also I will continue the story and let you read it, you have been inspirational to me. And of course thanks for the great words. I don't write much fiction and this is my first attempt at true erotica, so your words are appreciated.

    I await my next assignment and I will work on the continuation of this story.

    Oh and tense is a constant problem with me, so you hit one of my "walls" right on the button. I will work on that.

    have a great day.


    John
    Last edited by John56{vg}; 06-25-2007 at 03:54 PM. Reason: Left out something I wanted to say

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