Dear Dean the Great,

Since the students are doing such a great job of editing and offering suggestions, I'll not nitpick any further.

I do have questions.

Is this story set in the past, present or future?

How are the body parts of the living artwork stimulated in such a manner to avoid cramps, atrophy of the limbs, and poor circulation?

The creator of the living artwork is Jerry O’Connell -- as in the famous actor from Stand by Me, Crossing Jordan and a host of other movies like Kangaroo Jack?

http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0005278/

If you want to keep this name, you may want to add a middle initial or name to distinguish him from his famous counterpart.

Looking forward to seeing the next version of this chapter,

Ruby