Ah, ruby. So nice to hear from you. I must admit that I was relieved at not seeing too many red commas in my work. Proper punctuation is the most difficult aspect of writing for me. Well, other than the writing. Heh.

I am going to let this sit for a bit. I probably won't even edit the second chapter until I have a few more chapters in pocket. As you know, editing when you are too close is a killer. It's almost as bad as putting up a story right after you have rushed through it. I plead that such was so for my first few stories and vow never to let that happen again.

Thank you for taking the time to offer your two cents worth.