This is the second part of a story from Level One. I never intended it to turn into a soap opera. I don't even like soap operas. But that's where the story carried me.

Please ignore the paragraph problems, it's correct in my Word Document but it totally messed up here.

It's choppy. This sounds strange but I like it like that for now. Give me a week and I'll hate it, and take the advice I'm sure to get about making it flow better.