Mishka, my love.

This story brought tears to my eyes, you did a great job. There were a few problems with the flow, but you can already see those. I only saw one problem here that Aussiegirl missed. I loved the story though, and am proud of you.

Tossing and turning all night he woke up with a horrible headache and considered calledcalling in sick to work. No, he’d only pace and aimlessness and confusion would overwhelm him.