Thank you for your comments. I do agree that I must develope the charaters with describing their attitudes to this situation. It takes time to dothis and I must jump into their skins having lived on both sides of this issue. The man on what drives him to bondage and how itdeveloped with his sister. The sister her would be developed on how she was turned on by her partipating with this early experiences thatshe had and desired to contiue. The wife is more difficult because she was to be the one most effective. Her response would not be immediate, but she could not come to grips with what had handed out to her. She has still into the offended person and then went through withdrawl experience. Finally it came on to her that she would get to the bottom of this. The sister and her and her husband and her???Originally Posted by ProjectEuropa