There was a lot to modify of Aussiegirl's story. Holy crap was that story rough and ugly...like my ex-wife. In fact, her story is just like my ex-wife - take my ex-wife, please! Seriously, though, good job.

I am looking forward to seeing what you do with one of her characters. Also, I am hungry and you look like road-kill to me, HG. Get cracking.

(stomach rumbles)