tessa's assignment- finally

[tessa]

How did I miss this post of yours, Mr. Mad???? My humblest apologies for doing so.

OK I promised to pick out a nit, then ran off to the islands and left you high and dry? are you ever really dry tessa? Don't answer that your blush speaks volumes.

*muses to self, 'why else did he think I needed to bring all those bathing suits along?'*

Overall it's a great interplay. You just seem to have that cute little sub doing a bit of topping with her giggle. Don't get me wrong, I love it, just let the Dom feel he's in charge is all OK
Mad

It's that obvious, huh? Damn. I thought I was keeping that TFTB bad habit of mine under wraps. Guess not. I do appreciate all your comments on the story. Using those slight wording adjustments make for a much more intensive read. Lashes out at the reader a bit more effectively. My thanks.

hey I am in charge, right tessa?
Lews

Lews, darling Beast, always. Always and always.