moptop's Assignment 1 proper - finally!

[moptop]

Beswitching - how nice to meet you - beautiful cat!

Thank you for your comments - yes, you certainly had the feel right for that sentence - good suggestion, thank you.

Oh, I could have edited, certainly, if I'd liked! But I felt it was possibly rather more illuminating, as an exercise in showing my own critical processes, to go through it and comment it. That is, after all, what we do to others (poor old Mean Dean!!).

Also I thought it might encourage everyone else to wade in and tear it to shreds - come on, guys! It's short, I know - but there must be meat in there to gnaw at!