I have sat and read 5-6 mb worth of word documents in a sitting.
A long sitting but a sitting none the less.

Thank you for considering my meager suggestions. If you have already outlined what is going to happen fine great I look forward to reading it.

I am a very avid ready so far I am following what is going on with capturing carol (she is not captured yet) Spread em (not spread enough so far) and all the other serial titles each week with great antisipation. So do not run out of steam keep going.

The one thing that I notice in allot of this storys is after a strong start they start to get a little pettered out. Plots start repeating.

Please do not beafread to interduce a new cariter. maybe "Wonda the Wonten Harlet" just a thought.