What is the URL for this story... I did a search and couldnt find it
'Update:
I found it, after searching your name...

I am very familiar with your story... it is REALLY good, and one of my favorites.

I warn you about doing TOO much with one set of characters, unless your purpose is to create more then just an errotic story and is to spend ALLOT of time dealing with character development out side of SEXUAL BDSM LIFE.
Currentlyu I am at part 3 in it... (I read slowly over time) and I like what I see... So I am unsure how your story progresses...

If you need an example of a story that is growing almost too large, go to one of my favorite "Spread them" and take a look at the responses.

You and this writer are Excellent writers. I try to be that good. I would just hope that you spend more time on a verietty of situations and people then focusing your talent on one...

With that said, "Spread them" may also benifit from beign broken into 2 stories with different titles... That way it wouldnt be so daunting when they switch characters. And the stories are really seperate anyways.