Oh, John, John, I am just getting around to doing some reviews and have just read this... I really, really want to read more! Sewing kit, yikes, indeed! Please, stop enjoying yourself so much and write another installment!
I shan't pick any nits... you've suffered Mr Dean and your Muse already, why should I add more! Oh, OK, maybe just one... I found the sudden mesmerisation of his eyes unbelievable, or rather, I found that her showing no surprise or fight back was unbelievable. Too smooth. Can you make her struggle mentally just a bit more, be a little more horrified with her own reactions? That may not be what you want, of course.
I eagerly await...