*fans self*

Then remembers I am supposed to be critical too. A great first start to the writers' block Raxor - well done.

I would niggle over

Quote Originally Posted by Razor7826 View Post
What does he mean, ‘career’? Janice thought to herself. As Mr. Cutler continued to undress his prey, horrific thoughts of potential fates flashed in her mind- thoughts of rape, torture, and slavery. Janice knew very little about human trafficking, but as Mr. Cutler finally penetrated her, she realized a simple truth. This is how it begins, a rape and the desire to leave no witnesses.
Unless she is a girl who has spent too much time reading BDSM literature I don't think she is likely to have those thoughts - if she was, then her reactions would have been different.

When is part 2 coming?????

cariad