Quote Originally Posted by moptop View Post
Thank you, Ruby, I'm really glad you were able to find time to reply to this.

Thank you for your patience.

What you say makes a lot of sense. I do need to be more descriptive. Damn - as well as more succinct; more active; more action oriented; and using more adjectives!

Lordy Lordy. This may take a little time...
You can do it!

Meanwhile, are you enjoying writing in the first person?