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NANCY: Thank you for your good words. I am a journalist and I realize I have problems with tense sometimes, it is the bane of my existence, LOL. And the criticism is great here. I have been laz in my assignments lately but I do hope to get back to it soon.

You are a welcome addition ot the forums and the block. GOod luck and if you have any questions or fuirther comments, don't hesitate to comeent here or PM me.

As far as her passing out. I was hoping the rest of the story would explain that. I know where I want to go, just haven't worked it out yet completely. But suffice it to say there is a supernatural element to the story, thatn may not be obvious yet.

Again I appreciate and love your comments on the story. Thanks.

Welcome,

MOPTOP: Thank you so much for your comments. Yes, I think you might be right, she might need more of a struggle going on. I will think on that definitely. I also see her as fairly numb about life right now, so that might be my convenient excuse, LOL. But I love your comments so thank you again.

CARIAD: Yes, as I said I have been lax in the block lately. Been having too much fun in the forums and now with r/l. But I will get back to it. And this is the second place that you have said wonderful things about me or my work. I want you to know it is VERY much appreciated. thank you. And I will get to part two as soon as I can, LOL. hugs lovely cariad.
John