Quote Originally Posted by Rocky
I'm working on a couple of ideas, both currently in draft form. I won't be posting either story until completion (I am notorious for starting stories and then letting them sit for years). I'd appreciate any comments or suggestions.

The first story is similar to my "Memoirs of a Slave Girl," but with a completely opposite slant. In this story, the narrator is a male dominant, who discovered his tendencies at an early age. He starts by dominating his twin sister when they were both still in elementary school, and the story will probably follow him through college and through his career as a procurer and trainer of sex slaves. I think the development of this one will primarily include humiliation and some body modifications (simple stuff...piercings, tattoos, that sort of thing...maybe breast augmentation, but little more than that), but very little heavy abuse or serious violence (other than an occasional beating as punishment).

The second is one of those futuristic pieces; a teenage girl is convicted of a crime in an America where the only possible punishment is slavery. This story will primarily deal with her initial training at a state-run facility, and will end with her discovering that her new Master is someone she knew when she was free - I haven't figured it all out yet, but maybe a relative, classmate, teacher or spurned boyfriend? Maybe one of her girlfriends? This one will have some heavy abuse, both to her and other girls in the facility. One scene I've drafted already has two girls being beaten, raped by canines, crucified, and left outside to slowly die.

I don't know where either of these stories are going to go...whatever I write tends to end up having a life of its own...and I don't know if or when they'll ever be finished or posted. At any rate, comments or suggestions would be appreciated.
Ooh, those sound promising. I'm notorious for the exact same thing.. Ideas always seem so promising before they transfer to paper (or screen), unfortunately.

Perhaps the girl's new Master (in your futuristic piece) could be amiable with one of the administrator's of the facility, or perhaps related to a warden. It's too damn early for me to be doing complex things like typing or thinking, so if you want help from a half-arsed writer, just pm me. G'luck