Nancy, this was a rather solid analytical breakdown of the story at hand. Unfortunately, while it was quite well done, it was not exactly what the assignment was aimed at. Perhaps it was the wording of the assignment that left it open. I will blame Aussie for it since she wrote the assignment out. I like to pass blame to others as much as possible, too. But I digress. The essence of this assignment is to break down the story as an instructor. Treat it the way your stories were treated. It shouldn't be too hard considering what I have already read.