I have now read the whole story of Lisa's Reality in the Library. It is really great Aussie, and I agree with the reviewers that gave it 10/10. Although I found nits to pick, like those in my revision of the first chapter, the story is so engaging that they are hardly noticed. I now see why the rape, foreshadowed in the first chapter is so important for the plot. The plot is still unrealistic, since the abduction and rape are so poorly carried out that the police would be hot on the trail in no time. The story is so compelling, however, that it is easy for the reader to suspend belief. Congratulations on a great story.