Quote Originally Posted by Austerus View Post
Ok, thanks much. I wasn't sure whether you were offering up some casual advice or were helping muse by taking over some of the story feedback. I'll continue to make some changes based on what you have said, and I'll wait to submit another draft till I have heard back from muse as well
I am an advanced student, and part of what we do is come down here and pounce on the lower levels occasionally. Keeps us all on our toes. Not sure what happened to muse, but she should be back soon. You can incorporate my advice into your next draft, and when she comes back you can add in what she says.