I am finishing Level Two, and just dropped by here to see more of rose's editing. A nostalgic trip. I am glad that I happened on this story, which I think is terrific! It was a tough assignment, and it was put together beautifully. At first the quick transition was startling, but, by the end, Jessie's precarious position made it all believable. The story could continue to a second chapter in which she accepts abuse, not daring to object.

I like rose's change of MBO to perks, but the business jargon didn't bother me at all. It really set Jessie up as an exceptionally smart and capable woman, which made her sudden fall into bondage all the more stimulating.

Keep up the good work Austerus.

nancy