The #1 thing that turns ME off from a BDSM story is how some authors will continue 2 use&reuse many times over&throughout the story the same supposedly inticing abuse scenes;W'the intent O'creating "THe LONGEST Piece O'Porn Possible"-I mean after the main charactors have been savagely bloodied mercessly(2 the point O'death),if the same scenario comes up again in the story plot,it's almost totally boring&just a waste O'words!!!More words does not,in this case in particular make 4 a better story read I'm sad 2 say!!!-Thank YOU 4 allowing ME 2 have MY say!!!
S-M1;-):-!!!