A Connection

[Ozme52]

I'm working on my perspective of the scene/play. It bogs down... a few words, gotta go relieve my... tension. Reread it and change her from third person past tense to first person present tense... it sounds so much more personal... but makes for more tension to relieve.

First person is so... real. Too much of a reminder. So back to third person... just so I can try to finish it... more lumber to whittle down.

I'm working on it. Patience.

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I know... as one vulture said to another... "To hell with patience, I'm gonna go kill me something."