just an idea...

["Roof"]

This is just an idea for a story that I thought of...

The story starts with a network of men, all older guys (40s and 50s), who band together solely for the purpose of kidnapping and raping a young girl. I'd make The Network consist of, say, 8-12 guys.

The early part of the tale should focus on their preparations, i.e. outfitting a small house outside of town with all the necessary "equipment". I imagine one guy in the Network should be wealthy - to afford the house - or maybe all the guys could pitch-in to buy the place and stuff they'll need.

Then, I'd have the men start prowling for a victim. They could visit places like the local malls, junior high volleyball games, local waterparks, etc. until they decide on a suitable candidate. I'd have them pick a younger girl, around 8th or 9th grade, and innocent. I have a preference for petite girls, like 4'11, 90 lbs., but a bit larger is okay too.

Once they get a prospect, then they have to abduct her. I'd have the men stake-out her house, maybe even stalking her and keeping tabs on her with video and sound survielance equipment. They should keep her under constant watch until one weekend, when her parents are gone shopping, and the girl is home alone, they decide to strike. Her abduction could take place as she sunbathes in her backyard (her parents live in a secluded unscale home). I'd have her facedown on a blanket, wearing a flimsy bikini, as the 4 men approach. All the men should be wearing masks of some sort. Either ski masks or pantyhose.

It's up to you if you want the men to rape the girl then and there in her backyard, or wait until they carry her back to the van, or even wait until they get back to the house. Or all three! Either way, I'd have the men leave behind a type-written "runaway" note, to throw off her parents and cops.

Once they get back to the house, do whatever you want with her, but no disfiguring torture or snuff. Personally, I don't go for that.

Still, after weeks or humiliation, abuse, and near-constant rape, the men make some contacts over the Internet and successfully sell the young girl to an overseas contact. The story ends with the tiny teenager being packed into a crate (with airholes!) and shipped overseas, where she disappears forever into the shadowy world of N. African harems and white slavery. Never to be seen again!

Yikes!

Uh, anyway, I hope this idea inspires somebody. Thanks for your time.

Very good theme!!! I'd like to read several stories (or multi-episodes) of this line. Make the coed/female yuppie snob take more-than-enough savage punishment * as will break her spirit of resistance so that she's willing to service any prick shoved at her... regardless of the public sexual humiliation that's deliberately given her. Degrade her by forcing her to sabotage her prior reputation as the campus/office inhibited cock-teasing bitch. She can be ordered to publically offer a randomly selected guy a blowjob or fuck in full view of witnesses. Or she can be set-up for unexpected prick shoved at her and she has to satisfy him OR ELSE.

Roof

* Harshly mash her tits in a press, shock them.

[prey4me]

The kidnapped coed is a durable fantasy. Consider going back to around 1964 (or so), the movie, The Collector where a windfall-rich Terrence Stamp kidnaps Samatha Eggar (OOOOooooo!!). He didn't rape her--she does seduce him, once, hoping to gain her freedom. His interest was just fascination with a beautiful young woman, which was a category of life he had little experience with.

If I re-wrote it, she's be raped and fucked up and down daily and nightly!

But to the subject at hand--if we're through the issue of young victims--I don't find Sir Thumper's opening scenario quite believable. First, how many guys are in this rape conspiracy? And they're going to share just one girl? No, either fewer guys, or more girls to fuck. Really.

And their following and tracking her? This many guys in the proximity of one girl would attract attention, no matter how sureptitious they try to be. She--or her family-would notice!

Better to reduce the conspiracy to a few guys. And to execute a successful kidnapping, I would say one has to have intense knowledge of either the victim, or the environment. I would say, come in from out-of-town, and study the community carefully:A streets, train and bus stops, schools, churches, etc. Get to know what kind of girls go where. Then you have to wait for just the right opportunity. Which should be combined with just the right girl.

And it would be damn tough, realistically, to get the two together. You might get a good abduction opportunity, but for a fat or ugly girl. Or you could get an attractive victim--but no safe opportunity!

See what I mean?

My fanasy? Hijack a freakin' school bus full of prep-school cuties, filled with the likes of Alexis Blendel from Gilbmore girls!! Now that's a girl I'd love to have in a nice, deep basement!!

(And don't expect me to share, either!)

["Roof"]

The kidnapped coed is a durable fantasy. Consider going back to around 1964 (or so), the movie, The Collector where a windfall-rich Terrence Stamp kidnaps Samatha Eggar (OOOOooooo!!). He didn't rape her--she does seduce him, once, hoping to gain her freedom. His interest was just fascination with a beautiful young woman, which was a category of life he had little experience with.

If I re-wrote it, she's be raped and fucked up and down daily and nightly!

But to the subject at hand--if we're through the issue of young victims--I don't find Sir Thumper's opening scenario quite believable. First, how many guys are in this rape conspiracy? And they're going to share just one girl? No, either fewer guys, or more girls to fuck. Really.

And their following and tracking her? This many guys in the proximity of one girl would attract attention, no matter how sureptitious they try to be. She--or her family-would notice!

Better to reduce the conspiracy to a few guys. And to execute a successful kidnapping, I would say one has to have intense knowledge of either the victim, or the environment. I would say, come in from out-of-town, and study the community carefully:A streets, train and bus stops, schools, churches, etc. Get to know what kind of girls go where. Then you have to wait for just the right opportunity. Which should be combined with just the right girl.

And it would be damn tough, realistically, to get the two together. You might get a good abduction opportunity, but for a fat or ugly girl. Or you could get an attractive victim--but no safe opportunity!

See what I mean?

My fanasy? Hijack a freakin' school bus full of prep-school cuties, filled with the likes of Alexis Blendel from Gilbmore girls!! Now that's a girl I'd love to have in a nice, deep basement!!

(And don't expect me to share, either!)

The part about a group stalking a chick, being more apt to be spotted is good point. I like the idea at the end of hijacking a school bus load of coeds---preferably cheerleaders. (Unfortunately the ones I knew were prigs as snobbish as their bodies were sexy). The said cheerleaders would be put into a dungeon environment and tortured eg suspended by their wrists, their tits whipped, shocked, mashed in a vise; into being the fucktoys they'd been too goody-goody to be until "persuaded". When their spirit of resistance is properly and effectively broken, humiliate them and force them to public sexual slavery to offset their prior "touch-me-not" reputations.

[prey4me]

You want prissy prim and proper teenage virgin girls? I drive by RC schools, and the girls (after class) look so slutty! All sorts of tights, stockings, and socks. Different styles of shoes. Shirt-tails pulled out. Where are they rape-able sweethearts of yesteryear?

You want to pursue this fantasy, I suggest that it be girls attending an Evangelical girls' academy or a schoolbus full of Mormon girls. Now these are girls who haven't been brainwashed into "sex is bad," morality. Rather, they've been emphatically taught to wait for marriage.

And they tend, as a population group, to be nice, middle-class or even up-scale chicks, and therefore nicely dressed, groomed, hair-styled, etc.

(And, for my fetish, more likely to be wearing pretty, dainty underwear....)

Something to think about!