Just a comment here Omega, please don't take it personally, but your stories do have issues that make them hard to read.

It's not an issue of spelling - it looks like you honestly do spell check them. Minor spelling errors don't bother me anyway, as I can't spell worth shit. The problem is that your stories don't appear to have been proof read. The words may be spelled correctly, but they tend to be completely wrong words.

It's obvious in even your posts. You wrote this post earlier in this very thread:

I was in a rush when I wrote the synopsis, I was in a rush and few spell mistakes aren't a big deal.

I never said that Powerone was the one who said my style should be like his, someone else said it should be more like his, others were mentioned for possible imation as well.

It's not that I can't take critism, but I think Alex Bragi had it dead on. I like constructive critism, but senselessly brutalizing my work pisses me off.

As for being publicly critical of my critics, have I no right to defend my honour? I'm not the one who scares reviewers away.

I won't mention who told me this, but I've heard of how a circle of critics would blast people for giving good reviews to stories like didn't like, and the fact the most of my positive feedback has been emailed to me, instead of posted right on the site makes me think that this is true.

Now those are both minor errors, but when there is an error like that in every paragraph, it makes the story hard to read. When I read over the sentence - mistakes like that catch my eye because the meaning behind the sentence doesn't flow properly.

If you misspell a word, my subconsiance (sp?) generally knows what you meant to say and translates. But when you put completely wrong words, or double words up, or put together words that don't make any sense together - it forces the reader to stop and reread. That totally pulls you out of the narative.

I'm not slamming your writing man, I'm just saying that the lack of proofreading has stopped me from absorbing your stories enough to even decide if I like them or not.

Bunk.