I tend to be much more character oriented, and find myself putting what I would consider too many details into some thing written for this site. I have about four to five unfinished shorts for that exact reason....(well that and I think I'm a somewhat poor author)

But I digress, I was saying that I like the story, and the changes in the peoplpe involved. Far too many of the capture stories for example miraculously lead to the captured individual becoming turned on by the pain and humiliation their captors put them through with little to no explanation mentally as to why they changed.


So yeah, I'd read it.