Quote Originally Posted by phantasyseeker
Thanks for the encouragement, guys, I'll try to have it up when my college finals and stuff are over My idea revolved around a fantasy-world setting, with two lands at war. A girl from one was sent to spy on the other, disguised as one of their own, and then caught and enslaved by the high-standing official whom she faked a relationship with (merciful guy -- he could've killed or tortured her to death). But he had a sadistic, diabolical brother whom she'd spurned haughtily one too many times, who seized the opportunity and..well.. . Comments? Suggestions? Should this be in 'Story Ideas' instead of here, in the first place?
Are there railroad tracks involved? Diabolical makes me think of a moustachioed dastard with a penchant for railroad tracks and dynomite.

Hmm, I wonder how a Dudley Doright BDSM story would work.