Quote:
“You know,” Maddie said behind a yawn, “I can’t wait for Helen to get back, that way you can boss her around instead.” She flashed Maddie her cutest smile and reluctantly slid on her fluffy bunny slippers.

Is Maddie flashing a smile or Monica? If it's Monica, then a new paragraph should be used and Monica's name should be used at the start of the paragraph. If it's Maddie, then we need to change the name so the right person receives that smile.
Ok, too funny. I mixed up my own characters. "You know," Monica said behind a yawn....

That's a touch confusing when the author, herself, is confused.

Ok. Donning editor cap. Thanks for the input Ruby.