Originally Posted by tessa It serves to read the whole thread, doesn't it?? Ok, wonderful first line credit goes to the muse. The throw-up part was quite rich in imagery? Giggles, I've been bitten by the 'scan the thread thing' as well! LOL I wasn't sure if I needed a bit more imagery in there or not especially as the first line is so vivid with it.
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