FF,

Fantasy - Well if the fantasy has gone on -- it would be great for you to write it down.
(Nothing to witty the fact that WE would enjoy it. No sir!)

Pleasing - You can please all people sometimes, some people - often, but pleasing ALL the time - ah THAT is worthy goal!

Gwen - well, she (and narrator) abhors what is she 'made' to do (n/c) - but deep down, she revels in it (c) - then she hates the fact the it turn her on - and s even more aroused by THAT etc...

I like that downward (or upward?) spiral - it occur quite often in your stories, doesn't it? Real perpetuum Mobile!


SRP - some things are BETTER in RP then in r/l - and you can always neglect some 'undesirable' aspect of, say Ws.... and, for me RL play is often essential aspect of RP! ("What are you doing? What do you feel? EXACTLY!") - As long as it is agreed part of play.

Erotic writing - what is erotic often depends more on the STYLE then contents itself, don't you think. Some need clinical prose. Others need expetives, adjectives, metaphors, comparations etc.... and PLOT...


By the way - did you consider going back to those delightful early pieces you posted? "Buffet" (?) is great but it is more description then a story. I know it sound like a chore - but turning that (and) others into real, plotted stories could be rewarding (and your readers wouldn't object at all! No sir! LOL)

I hope you soon change your signature again!

Keep up the good work (and play)

Pej