Quote Originally Posted by Razor7826 View Post
1) When I heard the news, I was furious. (hopefully the tense of the word does not matter, though, if it does, my sentence will be "When I heard the news, my heart was filled with unmitigable fury."
2) Most people have no idea how to control their anger.
3) I'm normally not a violent person, but if somebody asks for it, I'm not one to rrefuse.
4) Time flew by as I checked and rechecked it over and over, unable to control my compulsion.
5) I looked into the crowd with contempt for their hobbies.
6) Over the years, my hatred for her never ceased to burn.
7) I plotted my revenge.
Hi Razor,
Here’s what I came up with. Your name is Charlie, and you are an angel with anger management issues.

You’ve been assigned as the angelic guardian of one Karolina Kurkova a Victoria’s Secrets model from the Czech Republic. She’s tall blond and hot and you need to keep her on the straight and narrow path.

The reasons for your anger issues are as follows.

1) As an angel you have no gender and no functional genital, not that you are tempted.
2) Karolina has the moral compass of a minx and the sex drive that goes with it.
3) Other than that she’s a bit of an airhead.
4) You are expected to not only keep her ‘clean and chaste’ but also prevent her from leading others into temptation.

To say you are frustrated only scratches the surface.

Yes of course you must use the seven sentences in conversation.

Now to add to your frustration, you’ll write this in first person from the angels point of view. Normally a first person POV would limit your knowledge to the narrator’s thoughts and others characters words and actions, but we are dealing with an angel here. You will have the unique challenge of writing a first person semi omnipotent. You can read the thoughts of Karoline and those she interacts with but you must get the reader to buy into this unique perspective. You may only talk to God, other angels, and Karoline; well maybe the Devil will chime in if things get really bleak.

Oh yes we want it all to end well and the foul tempered angel to end up being a likable character, if not a hero. This might involve taming the slut, solving the causes of Charlie's anger issues, or perhaps some deeper insight which will set the angel free. I’ll let you work on that one. You have 2000 words to play with, use them wisely.

Best wishes
Mad Lews