Playful, thank you for really giving the articles a lot of thought.

Like you, I have the very bad habit of not knowing how most of my stories are going to end! I have no problems starting them, but then............. well that is why I have a whole lot of unfinished stories LOL

I can understand what you mean about editing too. I am not sure of the time frame between you writing and then going back to edit, but I have found it best to not touch the chapter/ story for a few days, and then go back and edit. It is even better if I have left it for longer, as I tend to sometimes forget what I have written and get a really fresh view of the story.

You have pointed out a few areas where you want to improve and or work on. I think that is great, and I am sure you will be able to focus on those areas more, especially in the following levels. I think the key is not to stress about them, but to just see how you go and ask for help as needed.

You made some really interesting comments and have shown that you are serious about your writing.

If you haven't begun on the next assignment already, then you can begin it any time that suits you. The best way of doing it is just like how other stories have been reviewed. If need be, slip back to level one, and see how Dragon's Muse reviews a strory.

The main thing to remember is that I don't want a rewrite of the chapter you decide to do but a review of it. While I want to know what you will change, the more important thing is why you would change it!

Have fun and know neither H Dean or I will be offended by any changes you make to our chapters. Now it is not every day you hear that! lol