Very good RZ,
I realize the seven sentences were a little awkward but you managed to fit them in nicely for the most part. While Charlie didn't end up a hero per say he did learn and grow so that was a plus. All in all I'd say you covered the assignment in an appropriate time frame.
I just don't understand why your evil twin was whining about it. I'll go over it in more detail today and we can work on coming up with a new assignment.
Yours
Mad Lews