tessa's second assignment - The Waiting

[ladychipmunk]

I just don't kow what to say. After the warnning at the start of the story I did not think I would like it (I don't get into horor although I like LKHamiltons work alot). But felt I should read it and comment as a participant in the group. I was so wrong. That was very impressive writing.

I liked the way you did not know the main character was a ghost until the end.

[Nikita]

I'm glad the story was bumped.


Very good Tessa. I enjoyed it. Good writing and a good read. You had me in the grip of your hand.

[tessa]

Wow. A bump and positive comments. I think I might happy dance a bit.

Razor, you are a creative, talented author. Your kudos are greatly appreciated. My sincere thanks.

ladychipmunk, your comment about the main character's lack of living-ness made me quite happy as that was my intent. And thank you for taking the chance of reading my efforts here. Not everyone's cup of tea, so I understand your hesitation. And although I've not commented on your efforts (but I will), I am impressed with your descriptive abilities. I'm taking notes, if you don't mind?

And to nikita, whose writing prowess is decidedly noteable- that you consider my story good in more ways than one thrills me. That you took the time to offer up such complimentary phrasing is taken to heart...mine, to be exact. And your location- "where guilt is a virtue"...utterly priceless.

Thanks to you, Ms. Ruby. For it all. ~lil' hug~

All the best-
tessa