Thank you for your kind words. Yes, I can feel myself getting better at writing complete stories; both this one and 'Motherly Love' are both short but complete, and probably two of my best stories.

Hmm, difference between acting submissive and actually being a sub. I think the difference between the two is that they'd "do it again" if given the chance. The male in this story definitely has a submissive side to him, or he wouldn't let the tiny white woman push him around. However, that aspect is rather limited, as he certainly didn't like the experience and has no intentions of letting it happen to him again.