Razor's potential Fourth Assignment?

[Mad Lews]

I think you might have some luck mulling and you might be able to use a revision of one of those not yet ready for prime time stories sitting there on your hard drive.


Erotic Fantasies http://www.hotspotbooks.co.uk/?hot=Your%20Fantasies
has open submissions (no deadline pressure) and is looking for a broad spectrum of fantasies. Its an English publication and they tend to be sticklers for grammar and formatting. Still it's a good experience to try. Check there site out and see what type of stuff they've accepted.

For the others sites, just remain aware of submission dates. E-publishers have a quicker turn around but there is something truely satisfying about being published on paper (or so I've heard )

I suspect you're up to this Razor giive it a shot.
Mad

[Nikita]

I hope I'm not too late to the party Razor. I know men who would love to meet vicious Gertrude.

Your story had my attention the whole way through, good pacing, characters that are at the opposite side of the spectrum, and a dilemma. Unfortunately, the dilemma that screamed to be resolved did not.

Ask yourself these questions

• What would I want to do to Gertrude?
• Should I let Gertrude to continue to humiliate the male character?
• What would happen if the students gave Gertrude a taste of her own medicine? You get the idea?
• Finally, the most important question, do YOU think the ending is good?