I hope I'm not too late to the party Razor. I know men who would love to meet vicious Gertrude.

Your story had my attention the whole way through, good pacing, characters that are at the opposite side of the spectrum, and a dilemma. Unfortunately, the dilemma that screamed to be resolved did not.

Ask yourself these questions

  • What would I want to do to Gertrude?
  • Should I let Gertrude to continue to humiliate the male character?
  • What would happen if the students gave Gertrude a taste of her own medicine? You get the idea?
  • Finally, the most important question, do YOU think the ending is good?