- I already submitted the story to the library five days ago, so any further updates will not be reflected in the posted version.

- One of my least favorite tropes in erotica is the 'person gets sexually assaulted and ends up coming to some life-changing revelation about how they actually like it'. If Brian did like his abuse, he certainly wouldn't be admitting it to anyone, not even himself. I think the ending hints that Brian at least liked what happened a little. If he didn't, he wouldn't let her push him around.