Paragraphs. They are not your enemy, in the same way ellipses are not full stops. You probably didn't post this looking for criticism, but a full screen and a half of text does not make for a good read.
Thank you for the observation....and no, i didn't post it looking for criticism...i'll post no more, so as not to offend you...
Thank you for the observation....and no, i didn't post it looking for criticism...i'll post no more, so as not to offend you...
Post to your heart's content hun - it is beautiful and from within - whether anyone finds the read 'easy' or not is Their problem, not yours, you did not write it for them *winks*
Well done and thank you for sharing your lovely words *smiles*