Quote Originally Posted by Sir_Russell View Post
butterflySlave4u
Look don't take what a newcomer probably wannabee posts as anything to take to heart. Few of us are polished authors and when I read something from him that is worth any thought then he can tell us how to write.
You cannot seriously be saying that one solid paragraph of text is easy to read. It's either that or you just felt like taking a shot at me, so draw your own conclusions, but there's a reason teachers mark essays that don't use paragraphs badly. I mean, I'm the first to admit I'm not a polished author by any standard, but when you next get the chance, please, find me some published authors who don't use paragraphs or full spots.