Quote Originally Posted by SirMcDoogle View Post
What should be taken into consideration is the pure talent this lovely woman has for writing, that unlike most is able ot express her emotions through words.

Lion, What you said was vaild, Yes there should be paragraphs however, when you are writing something based on emotions you tend to leave out Punctuation and Grammer etc, and simply say what comes out. So she didnt edit this first?
Who cares?

Prehaps a comment on what you thought of the actually story not the lay out might help ease the concious of this wonderful women of whom i have had the pleasure several times and has corrected myself on all forms of spelling and grammer.

May i just say thank you to all (Esp, Sir Russell and Shy Green Eyed Grl) for jumping in so quickly and offering your support for this talented women


*Bows* That is all....Dismissed (:P)
smiles...ty....