submission Defined

[butterflySlave4u]

What should be taken into consideration is the pure talent this lovely woman has for writing, that unlike most is able ot express her emotions through words.

Lion, What you said was vaild, Yes there should be paragraphs however, when you are writing something based on emotions you tend to leave out Punctuation and Grammer etc, and simply say what comes out. So she didnt edit this first?
Who cares?

Prehaps a comment on what you thought of the actually story not the lay out might help ease the concious of this wonderful women of whom i have had the pleasure several times and has corrected myself on all forms of spelling and grammer.

May i just say thank you to all (Esp, Sir Russell and Shy Green Eyed Grl) for jumping in so quickly and offering your support for this talented women


*Bows* That is all....Dismissed (:P)

smiles...ty....

[Alex Bragi]

Just a reminder, all contructive comments are welcome here and that most certainly includes any 'newcomer', however I think it's time to steer this thread back to it's original topic--specifically butterfly4u's rather sad situation.

L'sCH, you've made you point--and in my opinion a valid one, however I can't see any benefit to anyone in labouring it. There are literally thousands of authors on this site wanting constructive feedback and debate on writing styles and methods--so, please, leave this one be.