Just a reminder, all contructive comments are welcome here and that most certainly includes any 'newcomer', however I think it's time to steer this thread back to it's original topic--specifically butterfly4u's rather sad situation.
L'sCH, you've made you point--and in my opinion a valid one, however I can't see any benefit to anyone in labouring it. There are literally thousands of authors on this site wanting constructive feedback and debate on writing styles and methods--so, please, leave this one be.