Hehe, thanks for the answers. About the skips; i limited that to the prologue, since it wasn't working well. the only chapters I have are just written in two parts, one from the perspective of both subs. (if that confuses you...)

And qmoq, I'm really starting to get what you mean by that, there is a lot you can fit in one day

Watch; as I continue writing the story i'll be a total whore to those '...'s. lol.

but did anyone feel like the second part lasted about 10 minutes? re-reading it, it seems so... short? I'm working on the third part, and i'm already starting to add little "an hour later" sentences. :x