Quote Originally Posted by H Dean View Post
well, hell! You are going to elongate this story before I have had the chance to abuse it? Fine! I guess it'll give me more to bruise you with.

Seriously, I have read a fair portion of this and it's pretty well done. Unfortunately, I have been busy with work and unable to really get in and take the time (when sober or not exhausted) to offer anything of value. I hope to do so this weekend. If not, you already have wonderful commentary from two people who pretty much know their shit.

Hoping to get to this soon - Dean
Thanks, dear. Wasn't trying to press you, but jerking your chain is so much fun.

I'll have the longer version ready by this weekend, so, if you have the time, take your best shot. If not, I'm sure others will be happy to do so.

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