If Candy isn't a confection, she sounds like an interesting girl But yeah, I like metal as well.

Glad you liked this chapter deigja. I had my writing head on for this one. As for why I can't write a bit more so that you get a nice, clean, chapter ending - All the better to toture you my dear (Really, very nasty, evil laugh, followed by snickering and hand rubbing).

By the way, when I asked you to give a score before, I just wanted to know who you thought had the best wicked laugh, Venom or me, but thanks for the feedback. The observation about Ann getting too far, too fast, was a difficult one for me as well. All will be explained later, Murh hur hur hur hur (#27 with a dash of #14).