Here it is, My 1st Lvl 1 assignment folks for your critique and correcting. I hope it meets with some approval and the red marks are few...lol.
I must admnit, it was a bit of a challenge, and quite an interesting experience to say the least....I hope you enjoy, and I cannot wait for the feedback...good, bad, or indifferent. (But please be gentle, use the rope flogger and not the knotted leather one *BWEG*)
DM