Oh very nice writing indeed! I am sure more writing along those lines would make anyone see what you like!

I also like the suggestion by Polaris that you let him know after a scene what you liked. I know communication is such an important part of any relationship, but more so in a D/s one. Do all you can to keep him in the loop of how you are feeling.

I am sure you will have lots of fun --- Oh and if you ever feel the urge to write more, do pop into the writer's block! You have a lovely way with words.